Their True Future  

MulleenofMelb 53M
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2/14/2018 4:43 am

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Their True Future


Their True Future
Go on Valentine's Day
show me one more couple
hands clasped tight together
striding in rhythm
as if own this world
and can see a future
aluminum siding bright
of long winged rocket cars
and perfect children
and food from pills
and no disease
such a gleam in their eyes
mercenary and perfect
in every way
so I say Valentine's Day
take your slick propaganda
and leave me here alone
I know their true future
as I suck on vinegar wine
of him crawling into a bottle
when the dreams succumb
to a rush of reality
and she dealing with
snotty faced brats imbecilic
dressed in charity cast-offs
the car a smoking junker
the house a disheveled tip
and food always fast fat
processed salt and sugars
distorting body and organs
both will die alone
choked on own vomit
and I wonder if today
I am a tad more cynical.



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MulleenofMelb 53M
2730 posts
2/16/2018 6:32 am

    Quoting yesmamallthetime:
    Thank you Mulleen for that extra poem on the disenchantment of a rich couple. I love the description.
just a different second half, and more than willing, in fact joyous, to be set such a task...and bring balance to the joys and woes.....and how money goes...

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yesmamallthetime 51F  
8847 posts
2/16/2018 5:54 am

Thank you Mulleen for that extra poem on the disenchantment of a rich couple. I love the description.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


MulleenofMelb 53M
2730 posts
2/15/2018 8:30 pm

    Quoting yesmamallthetime:
    And I thought I had harsh thoughts about Valentine's Day. LOL Thank you for the somber look but it also made me laugh for who are you discussing but those who are poor in the pocket. Should money make it all rosy? I think we need that version and what causes rich folks to fall out of love...
ah the rich can be as miserable, however you are right, it does seem to imply the poor are miserable in love for they don't have money....

so for the rich, the well off, the 1%......

I know their true future
as I suck on vinegar wine
of him crawling into that special vintage
he is a connoisseur he says
on his ignorance the sommelier preys
every bottle more expensive than the last
hits his throat and numbs his life
the perils of a trophy wife
and she dealing with
his flaccid physical demeanour
would deep six him if
she could identify fields greener
instead she stays and plays tennis
twice a week with darling Chet
who is all muscle cock and sweat
at home she trades insults
with this man she thought she loved
in her innocence was mislead
he cares only for his money
and appearances maintained
so a young bride he gained
yet both will die alone
the opiates will do their work
subdue the sickness inside
as bring on deeper depression
and then for him office suicide
and for her a spiral from
the elegant mansion home
but never ever trusting again
become another player in the game
fighting off the blonde and thinner
eating one dry cracker only for dinner
as she endeavors to hold onto
what she earned through innocence cost
trying to recover the naivete lost
till a malfunctioning sun bed
thin and dry and very dead
and I wonder if today
I am a tad more cynical.


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yesmamallthetime 51F  
8847 posts
2/14/2018 9:23 pm

And I thought I had harsh thoughts about Valentine's Day. LOL Thank you for the somber look but it also made me laugh for who are you discussing but those who are poor in the pocket. Should money make it all rosy? I think we need that version and what causes rich folks to fall out of love...

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


MulleenofMelb 53M
2730 posts
2/14/2018 3:39 pm

    Quoting Rengarih:
    Its nice thoughts of you
hmmm, an interesting reflection on the above, not quite what I expected. Thanks for the comment, and stay well.

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MulleenofMelb 53M
2730 posts
2/14/2018 3:38 pm

    Quoting author51:
    This optimist shall always see the light through dark times no matter what they are.....
never allow your optimistic perspective to be hidden under a pessimist's bushel

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author51 55F  
58682 posts
2/14/2018 5:37 am

This optimist shall always see the light through dark times no matter what they are.....

One can never have enough JOY in their life...


Rengarih 36M
13 posts
2/14/2018 5:20 am

Its nice thoughts of you


MulleenofMelb 53M
2730 posts
2/14/2018 4:44 am

take cynicism lightly, and if symptoms persist, it is just the world is really so

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